Re: [gentoo-releng] Documentation tarballs

[Guy Martin <gmsoft@gentoo.org>]

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On Sun, 18 Jul 2004 20:56:52 +0200
Benjamin Judas <beejay@gentoo.org> wrote:
> 
> PLEASE REVIEW UNTIL TOMORROW (MONDAY) 16:00 UTC.
>

I hope I'm not too late :)

Here is my little diff.
Please review the correctness of the sentences and xml :)

TIA

-- 
Guy Martin
Gentoo Linux - HPPA port Lead / IPv6 team
Lug Charleroi (Belgium)

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Index: hb-install-about.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-about.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -r1.15 hb-install-about.xml
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>   <li>
>     The <b>hppa</b> architecture
>   </li>
Index: hb-install-hppa-disk.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-hppa-disk.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -r1.3 hb-install-hppa-disk.xml
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< Several filesystems are available. Ext2, ext3 and reiserfs are found stable on 
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> Several filesystems are available. Ext2, ext3, XFS and reiserfs are found stable on 
Index: hb-install-hppa-kernel.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-hppa-kernel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -r1.3 hb-install-hppa-kernel.xml
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< For HPPA we have <c>hppa-sources</c>. Continue by installing this kernel source:
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> For HPPA we have <c>hppa-sources</c> for 2.4 series and <c>hppa-dev-sources</c>
> for 2.6 series. Continue by installing this kernel source:
Index: hb-install-hppa-medium.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -r1.3 hb-install-hppa-medium.xml
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<   You need at least 1 Gb of free disk space
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>   You need at least 2 Gb of free disk space
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<   For the <e>hppa architecture</e>, you should check with the <uri 
<   link="http://www.pateam.org">PA Team website</uri>
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> 	A list of supported hardware can be found on the
> 	<uri link="http://www.pateam.org/list.html">PA Team website</uri>
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< source code or precompiled packages. For example the hppa variant of this 
< LiveCD can be found in the <path>experimental/hppa/livecd</path> subdirectory 
< and is called <c>livecd-hppa-beta_04.iso</c>.
< </p>
---
> source code or precompiled packages.</p>
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< <path>install-x86-minimal-2004.0.iso.md5</path>). You can check the MD5 checksum
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> <path>install-hppa-minimal-2004.0.iso.md5</path>). You can check the MD5 checksum
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> <note>
> If you have problems booting the livecd or any other media, please read the
> <uri link="http://www.tldp.org/HOWTO/PA-RISC-Linux-Boot-HOWTO/index.html">
> PA-RISC Linux Boot HOWTO</uri>.
> </note>
> 

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