On Sat, Oct 22, 2022 at 08:55:09AM +0200, Ulrich Mueller wrote:
> > How's the clarification now, making it clear those are the authors for
> > version 1.2?
> I'd still prefer a single list of acknowledgements in alphabetical
> order, without any of the authors included. (But I don't have a strong
> opinion, so if you absolutely want to have a separate paragraph for 1.2,
> then go ahead.)
Paragraph kept.

> However, can we please keep the authors list (in the header) as-is?
> If we're now going to include people for adding a single sentence or
> suggestion, then we'd also have to list several (all?) of the persons
> who are listed in the original acknowledgements.
Done.

> >> Another small point: Whitespace in the new section doesn't follow the
> >> style in the rest of the GLEP, which uses two blank lines before and one
> >> blank line after section headings, as well as two spaces at the end of
> >> every sentence. (This is also what GLEP 2 says.)
> 
> > Fixed - the blank lines were inconsistent in multiple places, but the
> > two spaces were correct.
> There shouldn't be double blank lines _after_ section headings (i.e.
> only a single blank line after "Specification" and "Rationale") [1].
Fixed.

Also reworded to not say "Gentoo Foundation"; but still document the
intent about when verification could take place.

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