On Sun, 12 Apr 2009 15:31:26 +0200
Christian Faulhammer <fauli@gentoo.org> wrote:
> Ciaran McCreesh <ciaran.mccreesh@googlemail.com>:
> > I think I've removed all the TODO items and included everything
> > that's on the "possible" list for EAPI 3 now. I'd appreciate it if
> > people could give this a review before I send it to -dev@ and the
> > Council.
> 
>  As far as I can see the commits are ok, although I wonder if "a use
> dependency" is correct.  I learned at school that "an" is used in
> front of vowels, though I may have missed the exceptions because of
> sleeping in class.

It's how you pronounce it, not how you spell it. A yoose dependency, an
x-ray.

>  The explanations of the slot operators are a bit hard to read, maybe
> rephrasing (and splitting in more sentences) is the way to go here.

I suspect those're hard to read because people are expecting a
user-centric description of what they're for, rather than a package
manager centric description of how they behave.

>  Also I wonder if doexample and doinclude are good additions, but I
> have no strong opinion about it.

Yeah, dunno if they'll make the final cut.

>  Another thing: You should use \featurelabel not in a separate line
> but at the beginning of the fist line or at the end of the paragraph
> you want to mark, currently the margin marks aren't perfect.

Okay.

> > 725d5ae..1c311de is formatting for the new margin labels thing.
> > This'll hopefully get modified before we go live with it.
> 
>  You want the page layout patches beforehand?

I'd prefer to get decent page layout things in earlier rather than
later if possible please.

-- 
Ciaran McCreesh