Hi,

Ciaran McCreesh <ciaran.mccreesh@googlemail.com>:

> I think I've removed all the TODO items and included everything that's
> on the "possible" list for EAPI 3 now. I'd appreciate it if people
> could give this a review before I send it to -dev@ and the Council.

 As far as I can see the commits are ok, although I wonder if "a use
dependency" is correct.  I learned at school that "an" is used in front
of vowels, though I may have missed the exceptions because of sleeping
in class.
 The explanations of the slot operators are a bit hard to read, maybe
rephrasing (and splitting in more sentences) is the way to go here.
 Also I wonder if doexample and doinclude are good additions, but I
have no strong opinion about it.
 Another thing: You should use \featurelabel not in a separate line but
at the beginning of the fist line or at the end of the paragraph you
want to mark, currently the margin marks aren't perfect.

Something different: I pulled from the eapi-3 branch and made my
patches apply on top of it:

i) cheat sheet for EAPI 3
ii) pms.cls
iii) better page layout

They are not ready for shipping and I want to wait for EAPI 3 to settle.

> 725d5ae..1c311de is formatting for the new margin labels thing.
> This'll hopefully get modified before we go live with it.

 You want the page layout patches beforehand?

V-Li

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