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Subject: Re: [gentoo-doc] RFC: PostgreSQL Documentation
From: David Abbott <dabbott@gentoo.org>
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On Sat, Jul 23, 2011 at 3:44 PM, David Abbott <dabbott@gentoo.org> wrote:
> On Fri, Jul 22, 2011 at 8:57 AM, Aaron W. Swenson <titanofold@gentoo.org>=
wrote:
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>> I think the documentation I've written[1] for PostgreSQL is pretty well
>> set to be published. I'm submitting it here for a final review.
>>
> Also This section;
> <p>
> You can change your locale and encoding selections at database creation t=
ime
> (<uri
> link=3D"http://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/static/sql-createdatabase.=
html"><c>CREATE
> DATABASE</c></uri>). In order to change the locale for a database after y=
ou have
> created it, you must drop the database and start over again.
> </p>
> The c tags can't be inside the uri tag;
>
> postgresql.xml:410: element uri: validity error : Element c is not
> declared in uri list of possible children
> DATABASE</c></uri>). In order to change the locale for a database after y=
ou have
>
> I would change it so it reads a little clearer to somethin like;
>
> <p>
> You can change your locale and encoding selections at database <uri
> =C2=A0link=3D"http://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/static/sql-createdat=
abase.html">creation
> =C2=A0time.</uri>). In order to change the locale for a database after yo=
u have
> created it, you must drop the database and start over again.
> </p>
I forgot to remove the ). after </uri>
I would also remove this section;
</body>
</section>
<section>
<title>Initialize</title>
<body>
<p>
To finish the installation:
</p>
I attached a diff from yours to the changes I made.
Regards,
David
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David Abbott (dabbott)
Gentoo
http://dev.gentoo.org/~dabbott/
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