* [gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0: hb-install-about.xml
@ 2009-01-26 7:57 Joshua Saddler (nightmorph)
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From: Joshua Saddler (nightmorph) @ 2009-01-26 7:57 UTC (permalink / raw
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nightmorph 09/01/26 07:57:36
Modified: hb-install-about.xml
Log:
Engrish fixes, bug 253374
Revision Changes Path
1.4 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml
file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.4&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.4&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml?r1=1.3&r2=1.4
Index: hb-install-about.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- hb-install-about.xml 31 Mar 2008 21:48:08 -0000 1.3
+++ hb-install-about.xml 26 Jan 2009 07:57:36 -0000 1.4
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.3 2008/03/31 21:48:08 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.4 2009/01/26 07:57:36 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<sections>
@@ -134,9 +134,9 @@
<p>
You can install Gentoo in many different ways. You can download and install from
-one of our Installation CDs, from an existing distribution,
-from a bootable CD (such as Knoppix), from a netbooted environment, from a
-rescue floppy, etc.
+one of our Installation CDs, from a distribution already installed, from a
+bootable CD (such as Knoppix), from a netbooted environment, from a rescue
+floppy, etc.
</p>
<p>
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