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nightmorph    09/01/26 07:57:35

  Modified:             hb-install-about.xml
  Log:
  Engrish fixes, bug 253374

Revision  Changes    Path
1.44                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/hand=
book/hb-install-about.xml?rev=3D1.44&view=3Dmarkup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/hand=
book/hb-install-about.xml?rev=3D1.44&content-type=3Dtext/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/hand=
book/hb-install-about.xml?r1=3D1.43&r2=3D1.44

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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about=
.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.43
retrieving revision 1.44
diff -u -r1.43 -r1.44
--- hb-install-about.xml	1 Apr 2008 08:53:46 -0000	1.43
+++ hb-install-about.xml	26 Jan 2009 07:57:35 -0000	1.44
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license=
 -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
=20
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-=
about.xml,v 1.43 2008/04/01 08:53:46 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-=
about.xml,v 1.44 2009/01/26 07:57:35 nightmorph Exp $ -->
=20
 <sections>
=20
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@
=20
 <p>
 You can install Gentoo in many different ways. You can download and inst=
all from
-one of our Installation CDs, from an existing distribution, from a
+one of our Installation CDs, from a distribution already installed, from=
 a
 bootable CD (such as Knoppix), from a netbooted environment, from a resc=
ue
 floppy, etc.
 </p>