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Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: hb-install-stage.xml
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From: Xavier Neys <neysx@stork.gentoo.org>
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neysx       07/12/31 15:33:54

  Modified:             hb-install-stage.xml
  Log:
  [31 16:20:29] <zxy_64-2> i found a small mistake in amd64 handbook
  [31 16:22:28] <zxy_64-2> just above the Code Listing 6   it says "check the validity of the x86 stage tarball:"   where it should say amd64 stage tarball

Revision  Changes    Path
1.50                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-stage.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-stage.xml?rev=1.50&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-stage.xml?rev=1.50&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-stage.xml?r1=1.49&r2=1.50

Index: hb-install-stage.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-stage.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.49
retrieving revision 1.50
diff -u -r1.49 -r1.50
--- hb-install-stage.xml	3 Nov 2007 23:40:06 -0000	1.49
+++ hb-install-stage.xml	31 Dec 2007 15:33:54 -0000	1.50
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-stage.xml,v 1.49 2007/11/03 23:40:06 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-stage.xml,v 1.50 2007/12/31 15:33:54 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -148,10 +148,10 @@
 <p>
 If you want to check the integrity of the downloaded stage tarball, use
 <c>md5sum</c> and compare the output with the MD5 checksum provided on the
-mirror. For instance, to check the validity of the x86 stage tarball:
+mirror.
 </p>
 
-<pre caption="Example checking integrity of a stage tarball">
+<pre caption="Checking integrity of a stage tarball">
 # <i>md5sum -c <keyval id="stage3"/>.DIGESTS</i>
 <keyval id="stage3"/>: OK
 </pre>



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