[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: openafs.xml

[Josh Saddler <nightmorph@stork.gentoo.org>]

nightmorph    07/07/01 18:58:48

  Modified:             openafs.xml
  Log:
  final touchup from bug 176407, thanks stefaan

Revision  Changes    Path
1.26                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/openafs.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/openafs.xml?rev=1.26&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/openafs.xml?rev=1.26&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/openafs.xml?r1=1.25&r2=1.26

Index: openafs.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/openafs.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.25
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -r1.25 -r1.26
--- openafs.xml	29 Jun 2007 12:11:05 -0000	1.25
+++ openafs.xml	1 Jul 2007 18:58:48 -0000	1.26
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/openafs.xml,v 1.25 2007/06/29 12:11:05 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/openafs.xml,v 1.26 2007/07/01 18:58:48 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -1032,7 +1032,7 @@
 <p>
 At this moment, proper authentication is possible, and the OpenAFS server can
 be started in a normal fashion. Note that authentication also requires a
-running OpenAFS client (set it up is described in the previous chapter).
+running OpenAFS client (setting it up is described in the previous chapter).
 <!-- Left out because deemed confusing>
 Continuing without this step is possible, but in that case a quick restart of
 the server is required, as demonstrated at the end of this section.
@@ -1195,7 +1195,7 @@
 following command will not work, because it requires a real AFS directory.
 You can temporarily switch dynroot off by setting <b>ENABLE_DYNROOT</b> to
 <b>no</b> in <path>/etc/conf.d/openafs-client</path>. Don't forget to issue
-a client after changing parameters.
+a client restart after changing parameters.
 </note>
 
 <pre caption="Set access control lists">



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