[gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook: hb-install-about.xml

["Sven Vermeulen (swift)" <swift@gentoo.org>]

swift       14/04/13 10:29:03

  Modified:             hb-install-about.xml
  Log:
  Quick install is not at linked location

Revision  Changes    Path
1.50                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.50&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.50&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?r1=1.49&r2=1.50

Index: hb-install-about.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.49
retrieving revision 1.50
diff -u -r1.49 -r1.50
--- hb-install-about.xml	17 Dec 2013 10:38:05 -0000	1.49
+++ hb-install-about.xml	13 Apr 2014 10:29:03 -0000	1.50
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.49 2013/12/17 10:38:05 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.50 2014/04/13 10:29:03 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 handbook.
 </abstract>
 
-<version>13</version>
-<date>2013-12-17</date>
+<version>14</version>
+<date>2014-04-13</date>
 
 <section>
 <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -145,11 +145,7 @@
 <p>
 We also provide a <uri link="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Gentoo_installation_tips_and_tricks">Gentoo
 Installation Tips &amp; Tricks</uri> document that might be useful to read as
-well. If you are an experienced Gentoo user and just need a brief installation
-checklist, feel free to use our Quick Installation Guide available from our <uri
-link="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Documentation/Overview">Documentation
-Overview</uri> if your architecture has
-such a document available.
+well. 
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -175,7 +171,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Note though that, although the document you are now reading is
-architecture-specific, it will contain references to other architectures as
+architecture-specific, it might contain references to other architectures as
 well. This is due to the fact that large parts of the Gentoo Handbook use source
 code that is common for all architectures (to avoid duplication of efforts and
 starvation of development resources). We will try to keep this to a minimum
@@ -186,7 +182,7 @@
 If you are uncertain if the problem is a user-problem (some error you
 made despite having read the documentation carefully) or a
 software-problem (some error we made despite having tested the
-installation/documentation carefully) you are free to join #gentoo on
+installation/documentation carefully) you are welcome to join #gentoo on
 irc.freenode.net. Of course, you are welcome otherwise too as our chat channel
 covers the broad Gentoo spectrum :)
 </p>