[gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook: hb-install-about.xml

[gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook: hb-install-about.xml

[Sven Vermeulen (swift)]

swift       12/05/22 18:33:41

  Modified:             hb-install-about.xml
  Log:
  Fix bug #415197 - Use dependent, not dependant. Thanks to silvertip257

Revision  Changes    Path
1.46                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.46&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.46&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?r1=1.45&r2=1.46

Index: hb-install-about.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.45
retrieving revision 1.46
diff -u -r1.45 -r1.46
--- hb-install-about.xml	14 Jun 2010 20:23:53 -0000	1.45
+++ hb-install-about.xml	22 May 2012 18:33:41 -0000	1.46
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.45 2010/06/14 20:23:53 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.46 2012/05/22 18:33:41 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 handbook.
 </abstract>
 
-<version>9.1</version>
-<date>2010-06-14</date>
+<version>10</version>
+<date>2012-05-22</date>
 
 <section>
 <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
 <p>
 Sometimes you can pursue an optional step. Such steps are marked as
 "Optional: " and are therefore not needed to install Gentoo.
-However, some optional steps are dependant on a previous decision you
+However, some optional steps are dependent on a previous decision you
 made. We will inform you when this happens, both when you make the
 decision, and right before the optional step is described.
 </p>

[gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook: hb-install-about.xml

[Sven Vermeulen (swift)]

swift       14/04/13 10:29:03

  Modified:             hb-install-about.xml
  Log:
  Quick install is not at linked location

Revision  Changes    Path
1.50                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.50&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.50&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?r1=1.49&r2=1.50

Index: hb-install-about.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.49
retrieving revision 1.50
diff -u -r1.49 -r1.50
--- hb-install-about.xml	17 Dec 2013 10:38:05 -0000	1.49
+++ hb-install-about.xml	13 Apr 2014 10:29:03 -0000	1.50
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.49 2013/12/17 10:38:05 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.50 2014/04/13 10:29:03 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 handbook.
 </abstract>
 
-<version>13</version>
-<date>2013-12-17</date>
+<version>14</version>
+<date>2014-04-13</date>
 
 <section>
 <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -145,11 +145,7 @@
 <p>
 We also provide a <uri link="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Gentoo_installation_tips_and_tricks">Gentoo
 Installation Tips &amp; Tricks</uri> document that might be useful to read as
-well. If you are an experienced Gentoo user and just need a brief installation
-checklist, feel free to use our Quick Installation Guide available from our <uri
-link="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Documentation/Overview">Documentation
-Overview</uri> if your architecture has
-such a document available.
+well. 
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -175,7 +171,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Note though that, although the document you are now reading is
-architecture-specific, it will contain references to other architectures as
+architecture-specific, it might contain references to other architectures as
 well. This is due to the fact that large parts of the Gentoo Handbook use source
 code that is common for all architectures (to avoid duplication of efforts and
 starvation of development resources). We will try to keep this to a minimum
@@ -186,7 +182,7 @@
 If you are uncertain if the problem is a user-problem (some error you
 made despite having read the documentation carefully) or a
 software-problem (some error we made despite having tested the
-installation/documentation carefully) you are free to join #gentoo on
+installation/documentation carefully) you are welcome to join #gentoo on
 irc.freenode.net. Of course, you are welcome otherwise too as our chat channel
 covers the broad Gentoo spectrum :)
 </p>

[gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook: hb-install-about.xml

[Sven Vermeulen (swift)]

swift       13/09/25 17:23:31

  Modified:             hb-install-about.xml
  Log:
  Fix bug 485992 - Do not reference to GRP anymore, 5+ years is long enough

Revision  Changes    Path
1.48                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.48&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.48&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?r1=1.47&r2=1.48

Index: hb-install-about.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.47
retrieving revision 1.48
diff -u -r1.47 -r1.48
--- hb-install-about.xml	2 Jan 2013 19:16:07 -0000	1.47
+++ hb-install-about.xml	25 Sep 2013 17:23:31 -0000	1.48
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.47 2013/01/02 19:16:07 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.48 2013/09/25 17:23:31 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 handbook.
 </abstract>
 
-<version>11</version>
-<date>2013-01-02</date>
+<version>12</version>
+<date>2013-09-25</date>
 
 <section>
 <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -142,19 +142,6 @@
 </note>
 
 <p>
-If you want to perform a networkless installation, you should read the <uri
-link="/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/">Gentoo 2008.0 Handbooks</uri> which contain the
-installation instructions for a networkless environment. 
-</p>
-
-<p>
-Also note that, if you plan on using GRP (the Gentoo Reference Platform, a
-collection of prebuilt packages meant for immediate use after a Gentoo
-installation), you <e>must</e> follow the instructions in the <uri
-link="/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/">Gentoo 2008.0 Handbooks</uri>.
-</p>
-
-<p>
 We also provide a <uri link="/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml">Gentoo
 Installation Tips &amp; Tricks</uri> document that might be useful to read as
 well. If you are an experienced Gentoo user and just need a brief installation

[gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook: hb-install-about.xml

[Joshua Saddler (nightmorph)]

nightmorph    10/06/14 20:23:53

  Modified:             hb-install-about.xml
  Log:
  clarify the bit about using non-Gentoo installation media. users do have to go to the altinstall guide for extra documentation, as non-Gentoo CDs are unsupported. in response to bug 323973.

Revision  Changes    Path
1.45                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.45&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.45&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?r1=1.44&r2=1.45

Index: hb-install-about.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.44
retrieving revision 1.45
diff -u -r1.44 -r1.45
--- hb-install-about.xml	26 Jan 2009 07:57:35 -0000	1.44
+++ hb-install-about.xml	14 Jun 2010 20:23:53 -0000	1.45
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.44 2009/01/26 07:57:35 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.45 2010/06/14 20:23:53 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 handbook.
 </abstract>
 
-<version>9.0</version>
-<date>2008-04-01</date>
+<version>9.1</version>
+<date>2010-06-14</date>
 
 <section>
 <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -125,15 +125,24 @@
 <p>
 You can install Gentoo in many different ways. You can download and install from
 one of our Installation CDs, from a distribution already installed, from a
-bootable CD (such as Knoppix), from a netbooted environment, from a rescue
-floppy, etc.
+non-Gentoo bootable CD (such as Knoppix), from a netbooted environment, from
+a rescue floppy, etc.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-This document covers the installation using a Gentoo Installation CD or, in
-certain cases, NetBooting. This installation assumes that you want to install
-the latest available version of each package. If you want to perform a
-networkless installation, you should read the <uri
+This document covers the installation using a <e>Gentoo Installation CD</e> or,
+in certain cases, netbooting. This installation assumes that you want to install
+the latest available version of each package.
+</p>
+
+<note>
+For help on the other installation approaches, including using non-Gentoo CDs,
+please read our <uri link="/doc/en/altinstall.xml">Alternative Installation
+Guide</uri>.
+</note>
+
+<p>
+If you want to perform a networkless installation, you should read the <uri
 link="/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/">Gentoo 2008.0 Handbooks</uri> which contain the
 installation instructions for a networkless environment. 
 </p>
@@ -146,14 +155,12 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-For help on the other installation approaches, please read our <uri 
-link="/doc/en/altinstall.xml">Alternative Installation Guide</uri>. We also 
-provide a <uri link="/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml">Gentoo Installation 
-Tips &amp; Tricks</uri> document that might be useful to read as well. If you
-feel that the current installation instructions are too elaborate, feel free 
-to use our Quick Installation Guide available from our <uri 
-link="/doc/en/index.xml">Documentation Resources</uri> if your architecture
-has such a document available.
+We also provide a <uri link="/doc/en/gentoo-x86-tipsntricks.xml">Gentoo
+Installation Tips &amp; Tricks</uri> document that might be useful to read as
+well. If you are an experienced Gentoo user and just need a brief installation
+checklist, feel free to use our Quick Installation Guide available from our <uri
+link="/doc/en/index.xml">Documentation Resources</uri> if your architecture has
+such a document available.
 </p>
 
 <p>

[gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook: hb-install-about.xml

[Joshua Saddler (nightmorph)]

nightmorph    09/01/26 07:57:35

  Modified:             hb-install-about.xml
  Log:
  Engrish fixes, bug 253374

Revision  Changes    Path
1.44                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.44&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.44&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml?r1=1.43&r2=1.44

Index: hb-install-about.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.43
retrieving revision 1.44
diff -u -r1.43 -r1.44
--- hb-install-about.xml	1 Apr 2008 08:53:46 -0000	1.43
+++ hb-install-about.xml	26 Jan 2009 07:57:35 -0000	1.44
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.43 2008/04/01 08:53:46 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.44 2009/01/26 07:57:35 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@
 
 <p>
 You can install Gentoo in many different ways. You can download and install from
-one of our Installation CDs, from an existing distribution, from a
+one of our Installation CDs, from a distribution already installed, from a
 bootable CD (such as Knoppix), from a netbooted environment, from a rescue
 floppy, etc.
 </p>