From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from lists.gentoo.org ([140.105.134.102] helo=robin.gentoo.org) by nuthatch.gentoo.org with esmtp (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1FvviK-0004y7-Fy for garchives@archives.gentoo.org; Thu, 29 Jun 2006 12:33:44 +0000 Received: from robin.gentoo.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by robin.gentoo.org (8.13.7/8.13.6) with SMTP id k5TCXPPa013782; Thu, 29 Jun 2006 12:33:25 GMT Received: from smtp.gentoo.org (smtp.gentoo.org [140.211.166.183]) by robin.gentoo.org (8.13.7/8.13.6) with ESMTP id k5TCXOj1002613 for ; Thu, 29 Jun 2006 12:33:25 GMT Received: from lark (lark.gentoo.osuosl.org [140.211.166.177]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.gentoo.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 2F94E64550 for ; Thu, 29 Jun 2006 12:33:24 +0000 (UTC) Received: by lark (sSMTP sendmail emulation); Thu, 29 Jun 2006 12:33:23 +0000 From: "Lukasz Damentko" Date: Thu, 29 Jun 2006 12:33:23 +0000 To: gentoo-doc-cvs@lists.gentoo.org Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml Message-Id: <20060629123324.2F94E64550@smtp.gentoo.org> Precedence: bulk List-Post: List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Subscribe: List-Id: Gentoo Linux mail X-BeenThere: gentoo-doc-cvs@gentoo.org Reply-to: docs-team@lists.gentoo.org X-Archives-Salt: ca5176b3-666e-45ef-ad3e-1d54fc75c93a X-Archives-Hash: 37f1d2f99a9be8b538714eacea420330 rane 06/06/29 12:33:23 Modified: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml Log: fixing a number of typos, no content change Revision Changes Path 1.3 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml.diff?r1=1.2&r2=1.3&cvsroot=gentoo Index: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v retrieving revision 1.2 retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3 --- gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml 31 May 2006 09:26:31 -0000 1.2 +++ gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml 29 Jun 2006 12:33:23 -0000 1.3 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ - + @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@

This guide contains all commands you should use to complete a stage3 -installation including LVM2 on top of software RAID. This guide is targetted at +installation including LVM2 on top of software RAID. This guide is targeted at experienced users. You need a connection to the Internet to download the stage3 and Portage snapshots.

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ a rough estimate of the time you need to complete your install) # grep bogo /proc/cpuinfo -bogomip : 3337.81 +bogomips : 3337.81 # hdparm -tT /dev/sda /dev/sdb /dev/sda: @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ be detected and all modules will be loaded. If the kernel fails to boot properly or if your computer hangs during the boot procedure, you may have to experience with different configurations. The safest way is probably to use the -nodetect option and then load required modules explicitely. +nodetect option and then load required modules explicily. 

@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
 
 

 Alternatively, you can start networking manually. The following example assigns
-the IP addess 192.168.1.10 to your PC and defines 192.168.1.1 as your router
+the IP address 192.168.1.10 to your PC and defines 192.168.1.1 as your router
 and name server.
 

 
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
 another PC. Please note that allowing root to connect over ssh is not
 recommended under normal circumstances. If you can't trust your local network,
 use a long and complex password, you should use it only once as it will
-disappear after your first rebot.
+disappear after your first reboot.
 

 
 
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
 

 
 
-(Use the IP addess of your new box)
+(Use the IP address of your new box)
 $ ssh root@192.168.1.10
 The authenticity of host '192.168.1.10 (192.168.1.10)' can't be established.
 RSA key fingerprint is 96:e7:2d:12:ac:9c:b0:94:90:9f:40:89:b0:45:26:8f.



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