From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from lists.gentoo.org ([140.105.134.102] helo=robin.gentoo.org) by nuthatch.gentoo.org with esmtp (Exim 4.60) (envelope-from ) id 1Fji0M-0007rr-0m for garchives@archives.gentoo.org; Fri, 26 May 2006 19:29:50 +0000 Received: from robin.gentoo.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by robin.gentoo.org (8.13.6/8.13.6) with SMTP id k4QJTTq7008293; Fri, 26 May 2006 19:29:29 GMT Received: from smtp.gentoo.org (smtp.gentoo.org [140.211.166.183]) by robin.gentoo.org (8.13.6/8.13.6) with ESMTP id k4QJTSlx004548 for ; Fri, 26 May 2006 19:29:28 GMT Received: from lark (lark.gentoo.osuosl.org [140.211.166.177]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.gentoo.org (Postfix) with SMTP id C285A643E4 for ; Fri, 26 May 2006 19:29:27 +0000 (UTC) Received: by lark (sSMTP sendmail emulation); Fri, 26 May 2006 19:29:27 +0000 From: "Josh Saddler" Date: Fri, 26 May 2006 19:29:27 +0000 To: gentoo-doc-cvs@lists.gentoo.org Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: gentoo-freebsd.xml Message-Id: <20060526192927.C285A643E4@smtp.gentoo.org> Precedence: bulk List-Post: List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Subscribe: List-Id: Gentoo Linux mail X-BeenThere: gentoo-doc-cvs@gentoo.org Reply-to: docs-team@lists.gentoo.org X-Archives-Salt: 37636015-748e-4d8a-9445-6914c2ea0474 X-Archives-Hash: 4649d431196450df06b852aba1c9d173 nightmorph 06/05/26 19:29:27 Modified: gentoo-freebsd.xml Log: Minor grammar/spelling fixes for this update; no content change Revision Changes Path 1.20 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml?rev=1.20&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml?rev=1.20&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml.diff?r1=1.19&r2=1.20&cvsroot=gentoo Index: gentoo-freebsd.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml,v retrieving revision 1.19 retrieving revision 1.20 diff -u -r1.19 -r1.20 --- gentoo-freebsd.xml 26 May 2006 19:21:37 -0000 1.19 +++ gentoo-freebsd.xml 26 May 2006 19:29:27 -0000 1.20 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ - + @@ -59,10 +59,11 @@

-Gentoo/FreeBSD is a subproject of the -Gentoo/Alt project, with the goal of providing -a fully-capable FreeBSD operating system featuring the design sensibilities known from -Gentoo Linux, like the init system and the portage package management system. +Gentoo/FreeBSD is a subproject +of the Gentoo/Alt project, with the +goal of providing a fully-capable FreeBSD operating system featuring design +sensibilities taken from Gentoo Linux, such as the init system and the Portage +package management system.

@@ -294,7 +295,7 @@ If you want, you can now rebuild the system's core packages.

-
+
 # emerge -e system
 

 
@@ -304,7 +305,7 @@
 them in the following way:
 

 
-
+
 # emerge freebsd-sources
 

 



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