From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from lists.gentoo.org ([140.105.134.102] helo=robin.gentoo.org) by nuthatch.gentoo.org with esmtp (Exim 4.54) id 1FTjQA-0001n7-GN for garchives@archives.gentoo.org; Wed, 12 Apr 2006 17:46:26 +0000 Received: from robin.gentoo.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by robin.gentoo.org (8.13.6/8.13.5) with SMTP id k3CHl6nV025421; Wed, 12 Apr 2006 17:47:06 GMT Received: from smtp.gentoo.org (smtp.gentoo.org [134.68.220.30]) by robin.gentoo.org (8.13.6/8.13.5) with ESMTP id k3CHl5bm006331 for ; Wed, 12 Apr 2006 17:47:05 GMT Message-Id: <200604121747.k3CHl5bm006331@robin.gentoo.org> Received: from lark.gentoo.osuosl.org ([140.211.166.177] helo=lark) by smtp.gentoo.org with smtp (Exim 4.54) id 1FTjQn-0001vT-5o for gentoo-doc-cvs@lists.gentoo.org; Wed, 12 Apr 2006 17:47:05 +0000 Received: by lark (sSMTP sendmail emulation); Wed, 12 Apr 2006 17:47:04 +0000 From: "Josh Saddler" Date: Wed, 12 Apr 2006 17:47:04 +0000 To: gentoo-doc-cvs@lists.gentoo.org Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: apache-upgrading.xml Precedence: bulk List-Post: List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Subscribe: List-Id: Gentoo Linux mail X-BeenThere: gentoo-doc-cvs@gentoo.org Reply-to: docs-team@lists.gentoo.org X-Archives-Salt: 756064a7-762f-43df-ab21-24807061c414 X-Archives-Hash: e63888738c9a5a6ac0f0c9376845e821 nightmorph 06/04/12 17:47:04 Modified: apache-upgrading.xml Log: Minor spelling/grammar fixes. **no content change** Revision Changes Path 1.5 xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml.diff?r1=1.4&r2=1.5&cvsroot=gentoo Index: apache-upgrading.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- apache-upgrading.xml 6 Mar 2006 09:18:30 -0000 1.4 +++ apache-upgrading.xml 12 Apr 2006 17:47:04 -0000 1.5 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + Upgrading Apache @@ -27,9 +27,9 @@

-The state of Apache and it's modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There -were a number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining -everything the Apache herd is responsible for difficult: +The state of Apache and its modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There were a +number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining everything +the Apache herd is responsible for difficult:

    @@ -85,9 +85,9 @@

    -First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do -this using the equery tool, part of the app-portage/gentoolkit -package. +First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do this +using the equery tool, which is part of the +app-portage/gentoolkit package.

    @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
     
    -The packages you have installed may be vastly different, make sure you run this +The packages you have installed may be vastly different; make sure you run this command for yourself. -- gentoo-doc-cvs@gentoo.org mailing list