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Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: apache-upgrading.xml
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nightmorph 06/04/12 17:47:04
Modified: apache-upgrading.xml
Log:
Minor spelling/grammar fixes. **no content change**
Revision Changes Path
1.5 xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml
file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml.diff?r1=1.4&r2=1.5&cvsroot=gentoo
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- apache-upgrading.xml 6 Mar 2006 09:18:30 -0000 1.4
+++ apache-upgrading.xml 12 Apr 2006 17:47:04 -0000 1.5
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-
+
Upgrading Apache
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@
-The state of Apache and it's modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There
-were a number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining
-everything the Apache herd is responsible for difficult:
+The state of Apache and its modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There were a
+number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining everything
+the Apache herd is responsible for difficult:
-First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do
-this using the equery tool, part of the app-portage/gentoolkit
-package.
+First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do this
+using the equery tool, which is part of the
+app-portage/gentoolkit package.
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
-The packages you have installed may be vastly different, make sure you run this
+The packages you have installed may be vastly different; make sure you run this
command for yourself.
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