From: "Josh Saddler" <nightmorph@lark.gentoo.org>
To: gentoo-doc-cvs@lists.gentoo.org
Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: apache-upgrading.xml
Date: Wed, 12 Apr 2006 17:47:04 +0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <200604121747.k3CHl5bm006331@robin.gentoo.org> (raw)
nightmorph 06/04/12 17:47:04
Modified: apache-upgrading.xml
Log:
Minor spelling/grammar fixes. **no content change**
Revision Changes Path
1.5 xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml
file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml.diff?r1=1.4&r2=1.5&cvsroot=gentoo
Index: apache-upgrading.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- apache-upgrading.xml 6 Mar 2006 09:18:30 -0000 1.4
+++ apache-upgrading.xml 12 Apr 2006 17:47:04 -0000 1.5
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
<!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v 1.4 2006/03/06 09:18:30 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v 1.5 2006/04/12 17:47:04 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<guide link="/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml" lang="en">
<title>Upgrading Apache</title>
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@
<body>
<p>
-The state of Apache and it's modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There
-were a number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining
-everything the Apache herd is responsible for difficult:
+The state of Apache and its modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There were a
+number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining everything
+the Apache herd is responsible for difficult:
</p>
<ul>
@@ -85,9 +85,9 @@
</p>
<p>
-First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do
-this using the <c>equery</c> tool, part of the <c>app-portage/gentoolkit</c>
-package.
+First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do this
+using the <c>equery</c> tool, which is part of the
+<c>app-portage/gentoolkit</c> package.
</p>
<pre caption="Finding packages to update">
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
</pre>
<impo>
-The packages you have installed may be vastly different, make sure you run this
+The packages you have installed may be vastly different; make sure you run this
command for yourself.
</impo>
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2006-04-12 17:47 Josh Saddler [this message]
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2008-03-05 19:53 [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: apache-upgrading.xml Camille Huot
2008-03-05 19:52 Camille Huot
2007-12-12 2:44 Joshua Saddler
2007-07-29 21:36 Josh Saddler
2005-09-29 9:28 Xavier Neys
2005-08-01 15:17 Sven Vermeulen
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