[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: hb-install-gli-dialog.xml

["Josh Saddler" <nightmorph@lark.gentoo.org>]

nightmorph    06/02/17 19:01:07

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0
                        hb-install-gli-dialog.xml
  Log:
  Email addy change. **no content change**

Revision  Changes    Path
1.2       +7 -12     xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gli-dialog.xml

file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gli-dialog.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gli-dialog.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gli-dialog.xml.diff?r1=1.1&r2=1.2&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: hb-install-gli-dialog.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gli-dialog.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- hb-install-gli-dialog.xml	15 Feb 2006 19:32:39 -0000	1.1
+++ hb-install-gli-dialog.xml	17 Feb 2006 19:01:07 -0000	1.2
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?>
 <!DOCTYPE sections SYSTEM "/dtd/book.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gli-dialog.xml,v 1.1 2006/02/15 19:32:39 fox2mike Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2006.0/hb-install-gli-dialog.xml,v 1.2 2006/02/17 19:01:07 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <!--  The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!--  See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
 
 <p>
 In order to install Gentoo on your machine, you will need to prepare your
-disks. The <e>Partitioning</e> screen will show you a list of detected disks and
+disks. The <c>Partitioning</c> screen will show you a list of detected disks and
 allow you to specify the filesystems you would like to have on your
 partitions. Selecting <c>Clear partitions</c> will erase all previous partitions on
 your disk, so be careful with this option! It is also possible to resize
@@ -94,8 +94,8 @@
 
 <p>
 Since you are performing an installation <e>without</e> an internet connection,
-you <b>must</b> select <e>GRP</e> from the stage options present. Then, on the next
-screen, select <e>Create from CD</e>. Everything you need to build your system will
+you <e>must</e> select <c>GRP</c> from the stage options present. Then, on the next
+screen, select <c>Create from CD</c>. Everything you need to build your system will
 then be generated from the files on the LiveCD.
 </p>
 
@@ -122,12 +122,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Select <e>LiveCD kernel</e> and continue to the next screen.
-</p>
-
-<p>
-If you want to have a nifty background image during system boot, select
-<e>Enable bootsplash</e>.
+Select <c>LiveCD kernel</c> and continue to the next screen.
 </p>
 
 </body>
@@ -239,8 +234,8 @@
 <p>
 Please take the time to double-check each step of the installation process,
 ensuring that your system is properly configured. When you have finished
-reviewing, you may save your progress and exit, or click "Install" to begin
-automatically installing Gentoo.
+reviewing, you may save your progress and exit, or click <c>Install</c> to
+begin automatically installing Gentoo.
 </p>
 
 <p>



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