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vanquirius    05/12/14 00:22:34

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook hb-install-mips-disk.xml
  Log:
  minor grammar and spellcheck, no content change

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Index: hb-install-mips-disk.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-mips-disk.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -r1.16 -r1.17
--- hb-install-mips-disk.xml	2 Oct 2005 22:21:28 -0000	1.16
+++ hb-install-mips-disk.xml	14 Dec 2005 00:22:34 -0000	1.17
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-mips-disk.xml,v 1.16 2005/10/02 22:21:28 rane Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-mips-disk.xml,v 1.17 2005/12/14 00:22:34 vanquirius Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -125,8 +125,8 @@
 <ul>
   <li>
     <e>SGI Volume Header</e> (9th partition): This partition is important. It
-    is where the bootloader, and in some cases, will also contain the kernel
-    images.
+    is where the bootloader will reside, and in some cases, it will also contain
+    the kernel images.
   </li>
   <li>
     <e>SGI Volume</e> (11th partition): This partition is similar in purpose to
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
 Expert command (m for help): <i>g</i>
 Building a new SGI disklabel. Changes will remain in memory only,
 until you decide to write them. After that, of course, the previous
-content will be unrecoverably lost.
+content will be irrecoverably lost.
 
 Expert command (m for help): <i>r</i>
 



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