From: "Shyam Mani" <fox2mike@lark.gentoo.org>
To: gentoo-doc-cvs@lists.gentoo.org
Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: migration-to-2.6.xml
Date: Thu, 8 Sep 2005 10:32:09 +0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <200509081028.j88ASeMV000993@robin.gentoo.org> (raw)
fox2mike 05/09/08 10:32:09
Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en migration-to-2.6.xml
Log:
#101398 - Grammatical and spelling fixes, thanks to vanquirius and rane for reporting.
Revision Changes Path
1.21 +10 -10 xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml
file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml?rev=1.21&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml?rev=1.21&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml.diff?r1=1.20&r2=1.21&cvsroot=gentoo
Index: migration-to-2.6.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.20
retrieving revision 1.21
diff -u -r1.20 -r1.21
--- migration-to-2.6.xml 8 Sep 2005 10:10:28 -0000 1.20
+++ migration-to-2.6.xml 8 Sep 2005 10:32:09 -0000 1.21
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
<!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml,v 1.20 2005/09/08 10:10:28 fox2mike Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml,v 1.21 2005/09/08 10:32:09 fox2mike Exp $ -->
<guide link="/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml">
@@ -35,14 +35,14 @@
<title>Introduction</title>
<section>
-<title>Whats new in Linux 2.6?</title>
+<title>What is new in Linux 2.6?</title>
<body>
<p>
-That is no easy question to answer. Linux 2.6 is the result of over 2 years of
-rapid development and stabilisation of new features, and is architectually
-quite different from its 2.4 counterpart. Some of the more major changes are
-listed below:
+That is not an easy question to answer. Linux 2.6 is the result of over 2 years
+of rapid development and stabilisation of new features, and is architecturally
+quite different from its 2.4 counterpart. Some of the major changes are listed
+below:
</p>
<ul>
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
</p>
<p>
-If you're using a 2.4 profile, please change it to one that supports a 2.6
+If you are using a 2.4 profile, please change it to one that supports a 2.6
kernel by doing the following.
</p>
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@
<p>
If you are not a LVM user, but you think LVM2 sounds useful for you, you can
convert your disks to this format at a later date, by following the <uri
-link="/doc/en/lvm2.xml">Gentoo LVM2 Installation Guide</uri>. For now, lets
+link="/doc/en/lvm2.xml">Gentoo LVM2 Installation Guide</uri>. For now, let us
just concentrate on getting a smooth 2.6 migration underway.
</p>
@@ -535,7 +535,7 @@
<note>
Recent 2.4 kernels will also allow you to use "usbfs" as well as "usbdevfs", so
-you aren't breaking any backwards compatibility by doing this.
+you are not breaking any backwards compatibility by doing this.
</note>
</body>
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@
<M> Sequencer support
<M> OSS Mixer API
[*] OSS Sequencer API
-<comment> (and dont forget to select your soundcard from the submenus!)</comment>
+<comment> (and do not forget to select your soundcard from the submenus!)</comment>
<comment>(the following are required if you use LVM for disk management):</comment>
Device Drivers --->
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