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From: "swift" <swift@lark.gentoo.org>
To: gentoo-doc-cvs@lists.gentoo.org
Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: gentoo-mips-faq.xml
Date: Tue,  9 Aug 2005 11:29:38 +0000	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <200508091129.j79BTKI3028440@robin.gentoo.org> (raw)

swift       05/08/09 11:29:38

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft gentoo-mips-faq.xml
  Log:
  Spell checker run

Revision  Changes    Path
1.3       +9 -9      xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml

file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml.diff?r1=1.2&r2=1.3&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: gentoo-mips-faq.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- gentoo-mips-faq.xml	9 Aug 2005 11:24:51 -0000	1.2
+++ gentoo-mips-faq.xml	9 Aug 2005 11:29:38 -0000	1.3
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml,v 1.2 2005/08/09 11:24:51 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml,v 1.3 2005/08/09 11:29:38 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 <guide link="/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml">
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
 <p>
 Gentoo/MIPS is a small project within the Gentoo Foundation, responsible for
 looking after the MIPS port of Gentoo Linux.  We currently look after two main
-subarchitectures of the MIPS family specifically: Silicon Graphics systems and
+sub architectures of the MIPS family specifically: Silicon Graphics systems and
 MIPS-based Cobalt servers.
 </p>
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
 Okay, sure, some MIPS machines aren't the fastest boxes on the block these days.
 However, despite the age of some of these beasts, they still can make very
 functional, useful machines.  A Cobalt Qube 2 could make a very nice broadband
-internet router, capable of hosting websites, email, IRC and numerous other
+Internet router, capable of hosting websites, email, IRC and numerous other
 tasks.  There are a number of reasons why you'd want to install Linux on this
 sort of hardware.
 </p>
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-Good quesion.  In short... Heaps.  MIPS Processors see use inside all sorts
+Good question.  In short... Heaps.  MIPS Processors see use inside all sorts
 of machines, ranging from small PDAs (such as the early Windows CE powered Casio
 PDAs), X Terminals (e.g. Tektronix TekXPress XP330 series), through to
 workstations such as the Silicon Graphics Indy and O2 and even high end servers
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@
 theoretically run Gentoo/MIPS.  I've also written a
 <uri link="http://stuartl.longlandclan.hopto.org/gentoo/mips/">hardware support
 database</uri> in which users may contribute their experiences.  This can help
-gauge how well Gentoo/MIPS runs on a particular machine.
+measure how well Gentoo/MIPS runs on a particular machine.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@
 <p>
 Sometimes the filename will have <c>n32</c> or <c>n64</c> in the filename as
 well.  These refer to 64-bit userland images.  At the moment, support for 64-bit
-userlands is still quite flakey and a lot of packages are broken.  I'd suggest
+userlands is still quite flaky and a lot of packages are broken.  I'd suggest
 leaving these alone unless you're particularly brave and don't mind a rather
 bumpy ride.
 </p>
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-Unfortunately, not all graphics framebuffers are supported under Linux yet.
+Unfortunately, not all graphics frame buffers are supported under Linux yet.
 This doesn't mean you can't use the machine... it just means you'll need a
 null-modem serial cable to interact with it.  It is quite possible that the
 machine is in fact running, however, the system is outputting to the serial
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@
   </li>
   <li>
     <b>Is the server giving out the correct details via BOOTP?</b><br />
-    Double check your <path>/etc/dhcp/dhcpd.conf</path>.  ISC's dhcpd won't dish
+    Double check your <path>/etc/dhcp/dhcpd.conf</path>.  ISCs dhcpd won't dish
     out addressing information via BOOTP unless the machine has been statically
     defined with a fixed address.
   </li>
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@
     <b>Are you exporting <path>/nfsroot</path> in your
     <path>/etc/exports</path>?</b><br />
     Make sure you are exporting that to the Cobalt machine.  It only needs
-    readonly access.  Also remember to run <c>exportfs -av</c> after you edit
+    read-only access.  Also remember to run <c>exportfs -av</c> after you edit
     the file.
   </li>
   <li>



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2008-05-21 19:47 [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: gentoo-mips-faq.xml Sven Vermeulen
2005-09-08 12:18 Jose Luis Rivero
2005-09-06 18:00 swift
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