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From: "swift" <swift@lark.gentoo.org>
To: gentoo-doc-cvs@lists.gentoo.org
Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: gentoo-mips-faq.xml
Date: Tue,  9 Aug 2005 11:24:52 +0000	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <200508091124.j79BOY1X017122@robin.gentoo.org> (raw)

swift       05/08/09 11:24:52

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft gentoo-mips-faq.xml
  Log:
  Some language construct fixes plus license version

Revision  Changes    Path
1.2       +135 -145  xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml

file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml.diff?r1=1.1&r2=1.2&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: gentoo-mips-faq.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- gentoo-mips-faq.xml	9 Aug 2005 11:08:24 -0000	1.1
+++ gentoo-mips-faq.xml	9 Aug 2005 11:24:51 -0000	1.2
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml,v 1.1 2005/08/09 11:08:24 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml,v 1.2 2005/08/09 11:24:51 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 <guide link="/doc/en/draft/gentoo-mips-faq.xml">
@@ -11,32 +11,32 @@
 </author>
 
 <abstract>
-This FAQ is intended to answer some of the most frequent questions relating to
-Gentoo/MIPS and Linux/MIPS in general.
+This FAQ is intended to answer some of the most frequently asked questions 
+relating to Gentoo/MIPS and Linux/MIPS in general.
 </abstract>
 
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
-<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 -->
+<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 <license/>
 
-<version>1.0</version>
-<date>2005-04-23</date>
+<version>1.1</version>
+<date>2005-08-09</date>
 
 <chapter>
 <title>About this document</title>
-
 <section>
 <body>
 
 <p>
-This FAQ is intended to answer some common questions that we receive from
-various users.  It's aimed at both new users, and experienced users alike.  It
-has been split into a number of categories to make navigation easier.
+This FAQ is intended to answer frequently asked questions about Gentoo/MIPS and
+Linux/MIPS that we receive from various users.  It's aimed at both new users
+and experienced users alike.  It has been split into a number of categories 
+to make navigation easier.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-If you have anything to contribute to the FAQ, or, having read this guide, you
-still have questions unanswered, feel free to
+If you have anything to contribute to the FAQ or, having read this guide, you
+still have questions that are left unanswered, feel free to
 <uri link="http://mips.gentoo.org">drop us a line</uri>.
 </p>
 
@@ -46,7 +46,6 @@
 
 <chapter>
 <title>About the Gentoo/MIPS Project</title>
-
 <section>
 <title>What is Gentoo/MIPS?</title>
 <body>
@@ -54,13 +53,12 @@
 <p>
 Gentoo/MIPS is a small project within the Gentoo Foundation, responsible for
 looking after the MIPS port of Gentoo Linux.  We currently look after two main
-subarchitectures of the MIPS family, specifically, Silicon Graphics systems, and
+subarchitectures of the MIPS family specifically: Silicon Graphics systems and
 MIPS-based Cobalt servers.
 </p>
 
 </body>
 </section>
-
 <section>
 <title>Why install Gentoo Linux on MIPS?</title>
 <body>
@@ -68,8 +66,8 @@
 <p>
 Okay, sure, some MIPS machines aren't the fastest boxes on the block these days.
 However, despite the age of some of these beasts, they still can make very
-functional, useful machines.  A Cobalt Qube 2, could make a very nice broadband
-internet router, capable of hosting websites, email, IRC, and numerous other
+functional, useful machines.  A Cobalt Qube 2 could make a very nice broadband
+internet router, capable of hosting websites, email, IRC and numerous other
 tasks.  There are a number of reasons why you'd want to install Linux on this
 sort of hardware.
 </p>
@@ -85,13 +83,12 @@
   </li>
   <li>
     Status Symbol: Linux on x86 is so common these days it's not funny.
-    However, Linux on MIPS is a lot less common, and quite a talking point.
+    However, Linux on MIPS is a lot less common and quite a talking point.
   </li>
 </ul>
 
 </body>
 </section>
-
 <section>
 <title>Why don't you port Gentoo to NetBSD/MIPS or IRIX?</title>
 <body>
@@ -106,17 +103,17 @@
 <uri link="http://forums.gentoo.org/viewtopic-t-113387.html">Solaris/SPARC</uri>, 
 <uri link="http://forums.gentoo.org/viewtopic-t-319607.html">IBM OS/2</uri> and
 <uri link="http://forums.gentoo.org/viewtopic-t-319691.html">Microsoft Services
-For Unix</uri> for hints on how to proceed.  If, after some hacking you get
+For Unix</uri> for hints on how to proceed.  If after some hacking you get
 something useful out of it... chances are a few developers will pick up on this
 and help you get it to the next stage.
 </p>
+
 </body>
 </section>
 </chapter>
 
 <chapter>
 <title>MIPS Hardware FAQs</title>
-
 <section>
 <title>What is MIPS?</title>
 <body>
@@ -135,7 +132,6 @@
 
 </body>
 </section>
-
 <section>
 <title>What sort of hardware uses MIPS processors?</title>
 <body>
@@ -144,7 +140,7 @@
 Good quesion.  In short... Heaps.  MIPS Processors see use inside all sorts
 of machines, ranging from small PDAs (such as the early Windows CE powered Casio
 PDAs), X Terminals (e.g. Tektronix TekXPress XP330 series), through to
-workstations such as the Silicon Graphics Indy and O2, and even high end servers
+workstations such as the Silicon Graphics Indy and O2 and even high end servers
 such as the Silicon Graphics Origin 2000.
 </p>
 
@@ -155,95 +151,95 @@
 </p>
 
 <table>
-  <tr>
-    <th>Sony Game Consoles</th>
-    <ti>
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/PS1">
-      PlayStation</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/PS2">
-      PlayStation 2</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/PSP">
-      PlayStation Pocket</uri>
-    </ti>
-  </tr>
-  <tr>
-    <th>Nintendo Game Consoles</th>
-    <ti>
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/Nintendo_64">
-        Nintendo 64
-      </uri>
-    </ti>
-  </tr>
-  <tr>
-    <th>Silicon Graphics Machines</th>
-    <ti>
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP12">
-      Iris Indigo</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP19">
-      Challenge</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP19">
-      Onyx</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP22">
-      Indy</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP22">
-      Indigo 2</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP22">
-      Challenge S</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP27">
-      Origin 200</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP27">
-      Origin 2000</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP27">
-      Onyx 2</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP30">
-      Octane</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP30">
-      Octane 2</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP32">
-      O2</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP34">
-      Fuel</uri><br />
-      <uri link="http://www.linux-mips.org/wiki/index.php/IP35">
-      Origin 3000</uri><br />



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