Re: [gentoo-dev] New item for sys-kernel/hardened-sources removal

[Ulrich Mueller <ulm@gentoo.org>]

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>>>>> On Tue, 15 Aug 2017, Francisco Blas Izquierdo Riera (klondike) wrote:

> Updated the news item following comments from dilfridge, mrueg and
> floppym. Also made it display to users of hardened profiles.

Some very minor comments:

> Author: Francisco Blas Izquierdo Riera (klondike) <klondike@gentoo.org>

Format of the line is "Real Name <email@address>", so I'd suggest to
drop the nick in parentheses, especially since it is there in the
e-mail address anyway.

> Because of that we will be masking the hardened-sources on the 27th of
> August and will proceed to remove then from the tree by the end of
> September. [...]

s/then/them/

> As an alternative, for users happy keeping themselves on the  stable
> 4.9 branch of the kernel minipli, another Grsec user, is forward
> porting the patches on [3].

I had difficulties parsing this sentence. Insert a comma after
"kernel"? Also there is spurious whitespace before "stable".

Ulrich

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