From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from lists.gentoo.org (pigeon.gentoo.org [208.92.234.80]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by finch.gentoo.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D7497138334 for ; Fri, 31 Aug 2018 14:57:20 +0000 (UTC) Received: from pigeon.gentoo.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by pigeon.gentoo.org (Postfix) with SMTP id E8351E0895; Fri, 31 Aug 2018 14:57:18 +0000 (UTC) Received: from smtp.gentoo.org (smtp.gentoo.org [140.211.166.183]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by pigeon.gentoo.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id C1889E0895 for ; Fri, 31 Aug 2018 14:57:18 +0000 (UTC) Received: from oystercatcher.gentoo.org (unknown [IPv6:2a01:4f8:202:4333:225:90ff:fed9:fc84]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.gentoo.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 6D5B6335CD8 for ; Fri, 31 Aug 2018 14:57:17 +0000 (UTC) Received: from localhost.localdomain (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by oystercatcher.gentoo.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 706453C5 for ; Fri, 31 Aug 2018 14:57:14 +0000 (UTC) From: "Ulrich Müller" To: gentoo-commits@lists.gentoo.org Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Content-type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Reply-To: gentoo-dev@lists.gentoo.org, "Ulrich Müller" Message-ID: <1535726449.9650b512e23c167d38ad20097e7aef624d6c229d.ulm@gentoo> Subject: [gentoo-commits] data/glep:master commit in: / X-VCS-Repository: data/glep X-VCS-Files: glep-0076.rst X-VCS-Directories: / X-VCS-Committer: ulm X-VCS-Committer-Name: Ulrich Müller X-VCS-Revision: 9650b512e23c167d38ad20097e7aef624d6c229d X-VCS-Branch: master Date: Fri, 31 Aug 2018 14:57:14 +0000 (UTC) Precedence: bulk List-Post: List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Subscribe: List-Id: Gentoo Linux mail X-BeenThere: gentoo-commits@lists.gentoo.org X-Archives-Salt: b4fde22d-dc66-49a5-b39b-dbdde8da7e9e X-Archives-Hash: a3d302ea2100d8241f44aa0a4be35c87 commit: 9650b512e23c167d38ad20097e7aef624d6c229d Author: Ulrich Müller gentoo org> AuthorDate: Tue Aug 28 18:51:17 2018 +0000 Commit: Ulrich Müller gentoo org> CommitDate: Fri Aug 31 14:40:49 2018 +0000 URL: https://gitweb.gentoo.org/data/glep.git/commit/?id=9650b512 glep-0076: Style. Don't use "separate" three times in one sentence. glep-0076.rst | 7 +++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/glep-0076.rst b/glep-0076.rst index f1bedc9..3f50895 100644 --- a/glep-0076.rst +++ b/glep-0076.rst @@ -304,10 +304,9 @@ certified by the person providing the contribution. The term "free software" is used for consistency with the language of the Gentoo Social Contract [#SOCIAL-CONTRACT]_. -The remaining changes were merely editorial. It has been established -that the last point is really separate from the other points, so it is -more appropriate to separate it from the enumeration by putting it -in a separate paragraph. +The remaining changes were merely editorial. The original point (d) +is not part of the *or* statement joining the other points, so keeping +it in a paragraph separate from the enumeration is more appropriate. Copyright Notice